A Note About Email Business Letters. It might be tempting to leave out the closing when you're communicating by email, but don't give in to that temptation. Although no_closing emails are perfectly fine for everyday communication with your friends and teammates, they'll seem brusque – or worse, unprofessional – to people you don't know as well. You should also use a business letter closing when you're corresponding with someone professionally about an important issue, whether it's a new project or a job opportunity.
The second version is clearer and thus preferable. Of course, there are exceptions to every rule. What if you are the head of the Global Finance Team? You may want to get your message across without calling excessive attention to the fact that the error was your team’s fault. The passive voice allows you to gloss over an unflattering point—but you should use it sparingly.