Strike the Right Tone: Make the purpose of your letter clear through simple and targeted language, keeping the opening paragraph brief. You can start with, “I am writing in reference to…” and from there, communicate only what you need to say. The subsequent paragraphs should include information that gives your reader a full understanding of your objective(s) but avoid meandering sentences and needlessly long words. Again, keep it concise to sustain their attention.
A Note About Email Business Letters. It might be tempting to leave out the closing when you're communicating by email, but don't give in to that temptation. Although no_closing emails are perfectly fine for everyday communication with your friends and teammates, they'll seem brusque – or worse, unprofessional – to people you don't know as well. You should also use a business letter closing when you're corresponding with someone professionally about an important issue, whether it's a new project or a job opportunity.